TOKYO DTED review
TensaiShonen7
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Characters :
MC : Shown as p*ssy , afraid from unnecessary things , afraid from been compared with his brother , loved his childhood friend , couldn't confess to her until the end ( too late ) ,
he couldn't confront his brother for what he did
the mc through his days at tokyo got rejected and traumatized multiple time
kaedi :
kaedi only benefit is that she was able to cure mc problem
kaedi seem like a stupid girl ( maybe the author more stupid than her)
she isn't stable , either with her promise or for what she does , like she did lead the mc multiple time , even in chapter 20 she said that she will be waiting for him
also when she came to visit mc the only reason to came was to study , she even one day went directly and knocked his brother room
the big brother : a real piece of sh**t , he saw keadi every time visiting the mc and he know she is his childhood friend but he never conserned asking him about the situation
( i'm sure his big brother know that she is mc best friend and for a mature man you should at least think yeah i will ask my brother first if he have felling for her then if not i can smash )
and also he f*cked kaedi while he know the mc is in the other room , like what
author :P :
first he put the promise ( which is to go together to highschool i think )
then didn't explain the development from the point she came back to the point she started dating the brother , then he made her fuck the mc multiple time after that she told him that she will be waiting for him at home , after he went back she refused him and he didn't even confronted his brother as i said in beginning
Mc Friend :
No comment
Blonde Girl / Idol Girl :
No comment also , i can't complain much since they helped the mc a lot
2nd manager : liked his personality
1st manager : f*ck him
mc first crush in tokyo : f*ck her also hahaha .
the ending and chapters :
was rushed too much , there is even a chapter with 6 page for no reason at all
overall : story is 3.5 but just from the blonde and idol girl the story go up to 5
MC : Shown as p*ssy , afraid from unnecessary things , afraid from been compared with his brother , loved his childhood friend , couldn't confess to her until the end ( too late ) ,
he couldn't confront his brother for what he did
the mc through his days at tokyo got rejected and traumatized multiple time
kaedi :
kaedi only benefit is that she was able to cure mc problem
kaedi seem like a stupid girl ( maybe the author more stupid than her)
she isn't stable , either with her promise or for what she does , like she did lead the mc multiple time , even in chapter 20 she said that she will be waiting for him
also when she came to visit mc the only reason to came was to study , she even one day went directly and knocked his brother room
the big brother : a real piece of sh**t , he saw keadi every time visiting the mc and he know she is his childhood friend but he never conserned asking him about the situation
( i'm sure his big brother know that she is mc best friend and for a mature man you should at least think yeah i will ask my brother first if he have felling for her then if not i can smash )
and also he f*cked kaedi while he know the mc is in the other room , like what
author :P :
first he put the promise ( which is to go together to highschool i think )
then didn't explain the development from the point she came back to the point she started dating the brother , then he made her fuck the mc multiple time after that she told him that she will be waiting for him at home , after he went back she refused him and he didn't even confronted his brother as i said in beginning
Mc Friend :
No comment
Blonde Girl / Idol Girl :
No comment also , i can't complain much since they helped the mc a lot
2nd manager : liked his personality
1st manager : f*ck him
mc first crush in tokyo : f*ck her also hahaha .
the ending and chapters :
was rushed too much , there is even a chapter with 6 page for no reason at all
overall : story is 3.5 but just from the blonde and idol girl the story go up to 5
Spenden
TOKYO DTED
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Autor
Kotani Yoko
Künstler
Kotani Yoko
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